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    hi po.. im Vince and im a singer song writer.

    im just asking for a little time to close your eyes and open your ears. and take time to listen to my original song


    "If i could just" by Joe Vince

    this si the link https://soundcloud.com/joe-vince/if-i-could-just


    thank you. im open for constructive criticisim . thank you for giving your time to listen

    salamat..! mabuhay ang OPM

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    up
    uppppppppppppppppppp

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    Dili man au ma.klaro ang ubang wordings. (esp sa first part)

    Nice! Nice!
    Ka.appreciate au ko sa rhythm ug sa tempo ug sa lyrics pud.
    Nice, Nice. Bongol lang jud ko sa first part.



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    salamat bro.,.. okay kaayo ko sa constructive criticisim.. wla pa koy idea sa recording and mixing sad.. thanks

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    naay mga words nga di maayo pagka pronounce. labi na sa intro..

    murag guol man hehe. try more upbeat na kanta. di na uso kaayo emotional na songs karron.

    nice ang piano.. try adding synthesizer, experiment with other instrument.

    these are just my opinion..

    have a good time making music bro.

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    Quote Originally Posted by emailroy2002 View Post
    naay mga words nga di maayo pagka pronounce. labi na sa intro..

    murag guol man hehe. try more upbeat na kanta. di na uso kaayo emotional na songs karron.

    nice ang piano.. try adding synthesizer, experiment with other instrument.

    these are just my opinion..

    have a good time making music bro.
    thanks bro actually i write song from the heart.. cgru kana nga time naguol lng gyud ko ...

    i am trying to experiments pa pero nihit au ang time..
    well salamat for dropping by <3

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    World Music migo

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    Up for you bro, it's a nice song I can easily relate.

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    thanks bro ... sakiit gyud xa

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    ok ra ng hinay nga kanta..labi na karo'ng gabii..magduka ta..hehe..di bitaw..naa sad maka relate labi na kanang pareha ug na experience nimo...nindot sad ug intro...ang lyrics basin ma improve pa nimo pero ok na man...

    sa pagkanta, nindot man sad..ma klaro dyud ang emosyon...pero medyo naay uban wala ma pronounce ug maayo...

    Just to be with you ang lyrics pero mura'g naa lagi "here" paminawon..Just to be here with you..

    I'll wish that you won't let me go kay mura'g I'll wish that you will let me go, paminawon...

    ambot lang kaha..guba siguro ako'ng headset...hehe..

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