just wanna share a poem i made for the one who hurts me

[azaleayve]

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well, i am not into literature, but i suddenly felt like making one for him...he actually had a copy of it, so just wanna share it lng...

Life won’t be the same without you
I just heard it and so do you
But it means a lot to me
Just the way you do.

I can’t say that I will always love you
Coz I don’t know till when this heart will feel this for you
So I’d rather say
I love you and hope you believe it’s true.

I maybe right in saying this
That you don’t love me and never cared
But I’ll just fantasize and dream
That you do and you care.

You are the only reason
Why I wanted to love again
To believe that love really existed
And grow in my heart again

But I guess today isn’t the right time
For us to feel that thing
Because you are still in love
And I am absolutely sure, not to me.

So now, I hope one day
That you will feel the same
And that one day won’t be too late
That there will be US in YOU and ME

[jeff_bonz59]

charing kau ni nga poem dah...

hehehehe

[sHenZee03]

What if he says:


There's so much more you need to know about me
But I just can't tell you because I'm afraid to take the risk
I wish I could tell it all to you so you'd see
Wish I can type it all and save it in a disk

But you're worth more than just that kind of lousy effort
Of me letting you know
You make me jittery, even nervous...of some sort
And that these feelings just won't stop to grow

So I decided I'll never tell you
Keep it quiet, keep it my secret and I'm sorry
That you'll remain forever blue
But I'd rather keep the truth from you because I don't want us to become another used to be.


Sorry, I couldn't help but do a counter poem and maybe open another perspective for you about your situation. Hehehe. Hope you don't mind. ^_^

[LeeLeePot]

mutubag pud daw ko kunuhay sa counter poem sa boy if makabalo daun ang girl...lol!

then you are a coward-- a mindless soul!
you should have known my heart after all!
my hands are cold,
it's yours to hold,
but you keep it at bay so as not to fall!

you hold me in your deepest secret-- i thank you for that!
if secrets are edible then you must've turned fat!
and since now that i know,
that you also love me so,
then decide right away if we're into this or not!

lol!

[sHenZee03]

Selfish, ignorant, a big ass coward
That's what I hoped you'd say to me
But hey, I'm not like other guys who'd come forward
This is me and this is what I'll always be

I'm just typical, neurotic and plain
Just like any guy like me would be
I'm sorry if I'm causing you too much pain
But sadly, there'll never be a you and me

I've already said my piece earlier
And you gave me a question that I've given much thought
I'm sorry if I couldn't make this sound a bit friendlier
But I choose to say "I'm sorry but I'd rather go with not".


^_^

[annerhexian]

Motubag ang mama (bisaya lang ko ha kay grade 6 lang ang natapos kow)

Anak, dako na kaayu ka,
ug ekaw maka agi sa klasi klasi na gugma
Ang gugma lcod espelingon,
pero manta dili mawala ang imong matahum.

Igo ra ko tan aw sa imong mga desiyun
kay ako naa pagsalig sa emong mga askyon
Kung ekaw ga eskwela akong pangga
intawn unaha ang eskwela ug ayaw ang gugma

Kabalo ko, ikaw nasakitan... desiyun na emong gibuhat
pero intawn ayaw pod ka ahat..
Kaon lang anak ug kitkat
Kay kami una masakitan sa kaparat

Kung ikaw ga trabaho....
ayaw lang jd kalimti ug ka apektado
kay looy baya kung walay opisyu
unsaon nalang ang mga gasto..

Dailang, mo abot ra na.. ug makasabot
sa pagkakaron, ayaw to o ug botbot
padako, pahimsug ug pag tindog
kay kung ikaw napandol, anak intawn BAROG!

[reigel99]

Selfish, ignorant, a big ass coward
That's what I hoped you'd say to me
Buy hey, I'm not like other guys who'd come forward
This is me and this is what I'll always be

I'm just typical, neurotic and plain
Just like any guy like me would be
I'm sorry if I'm causing you too much pain
But sadly, there'll never be a you and me

I've already said my piece earlier
And you gave me a question that I've given much thought
I'm sorry if I couldn't make this sound a bit friendlier
But I choose to say "I'm sorry but I'd rather go with not".


^_^

as far as I know you, you can do much more
even pretty little things you do I can not ignore
coward you may be, but please don't go away too far
my nights would be empty, no more shining star

Please try to reconsider everything I said
I love you the most, you're always in my head
There's no turning point, and I don't want to move on
It's only you I could think of, please take me home

I can't let you go, and I'd rather die
You know I need you, and my heart can not lie
You are the light and guidance in my way
Please, I'm begging you -please stay

[petketz]

I wanted to stay
but my heart needs to go away
I know you want me to stay
but please let me go as I say

your loved was treasured within me
but I just can't let you to love me
for I am so worthless for loving you
bcoz you deserve more than I do

I'd rather be gone now and forever
for you to look for another
a guy that is worthy to stay at your side
the one whom you deserve to abide

so i'm saying goodbye to you now
atleast I'm telling you how
to go live with your life to the fullest
and someday you can say that that is the best!

sakto ba? lol

[reigel99]

I really don't know what's you're saying
In all heavens you're the one I've been praying
I can't understand it all, maybe I'm dumb
With the words you're telling me, I become numb

You are my life, my adventure, my all
How can I live without you, life is cruel
I don't want you to go, I want you to stay
loving you always, every moment -everyday

Can we go dance and have fun?
Can we run around? -until the setting sun
Can we just be together all night long
Can you stay for me, and correct the things I was wrong.

[jumper_stage]

I can’t belive we met like this
Is it just coincidence
I had a feeling I’d be seeing you again
Your every bit as beautiful as the last time we met
When you told me, you were leaving, and going back to him
How I wish that I could tell you, it’s all in the past
But I was never good at lying, and baby since you asked

I don’t want to hear that song again from the night we first met
I don’t want to hear you wispering, things I’d rather forget
I don’t want to look into your eyes, cause you know what happens next
We’ll be making love and than
I fall all over again.

I can’t begin to tell you, just how sorry I am
That the man you built your dreams around, just broke your heart again
I think I know the feeling
Cause I once loved you so much
That I swore I’d rather die than live a day without your touch
If I held you in my arms you know, I’d never let you go
But this ain’t the time or place to get emotional

I don’t want to hear that song again, from the night we first met
I don’t want to hear you wispering, things I’d rather forget
I don’t want to look into your eyes, cause you know what happens next
We’ll be making love and than
I’d fall all over again

I was crying when you kissed me
Than you walked out that door,
Ohhh
You were always sucha mystery
I still dream we’re making love
Than I stop myself because

I don’t want to hear that song again, from the night we first met
I don’t want to hear you whispering, things I’d rather forget
I don’t want to look into your eyes cause you know what happens next
We’ll be making love and than
I’d fall all over again

I fall all over again