Thanks! I had some progress during the Christmas break. Btw, the project you are mentioning--would my effort fall within its scope? Is it submittable?Originally Posted by thisbe.ara
Here are the outlines I came up with. I plan to use my own experiences and the experiences and history of friends and relatives as "templates" for the histories (tapolan ko mag research...). Could I ask for your help to see whether the histories of my characters are realistic (e.g., their lifestyles, biases, ages, etc.). For instance, I don't know of any ancestor who belong to the late 19th century urban bourgeoisie of Cebu (my main character's paternal grand-mother is supposed to be so). If you have ancestors with this background, perhaps you can share their history
Here's a mindmap. I don't see it in the preview, so in case it does not show, here's the link: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:T...leoutline2.JPG
Here's the outline in linear form:
1. Translator’s note
a. Who: John Paul Matuod, CPA, is (close friend from highschool)
b. Translated with permission
c. I also wanted to share with my own loved ones. We share very similar values. His history is also the history of many of our friends.
d. Creative Commons, but pay this way..
2. As I look at you in the arms of your mother sleeping…
a. Establish that it is a father talking to his son
b. Introduce mother, priest brother
c. What he will talk about and why
d. Some emotional pull for the reader…
3. Manila
a. Your mom and I talked about this a lot… your future… in Manila
b. Manila and meeting your mom
c. The worlds of Manila
d. SM boxed, liberation—no longer the son of x, the brother of y… but then…
4. Cebu
a. However, you will always have a home in Cebu…
b. Overview…
c. Childhood and adolescence in Cebu
d. Pop history, cousins (and I thought this only happens in Manila)
e. High-school stories
5. Your grandpa
a. Vic, Language politics, Cebuano Identity
6. Your grandma
a. Entrepreneurial Cebu, panahon sa pagbitay’g iro
7. Your grandpa’s parents
a. Matuod, Waray Entrepreneur
b. Banzon, urban bourgeoisie
c. Post-war Cebu
d. Grand Aunties in the US (70’s nurse)
8. Your grandma’s parents
a. Big old family in Argao-type place
b. the family as the center of Cebuano society
c. Late 19th-century Cebu
9. Miguel Ayuntamo
a. Bisaya overview
b. The day I found out I was a racist
c. Tagay
10. The first 800
a. Banzon legend
b. Sto. Nino
c. Your uncle, Fr. Gan, Kauswagan
d. Your uncle hates this, and so would have your grandpa, but your grandma would have not found this scandalous… Pascal’s wager
e. Perhaps the most important thing the priest in highschool taught me… fail fast and fail cheap
f. Facing death
11. John Paul Matuod died on…




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