Your Love Poem

[amaw]

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kahayahay gud nimo bai
nga nagpaulipon ka sa gugmang giatay
kinahanglan imo gyung mapasogut si inday
kay ang imong gihaguan, usik lang ug morag gilabay

pero hinaut imong hinumduman kanunay
nga ulahi na permi ang pagmahay
so kung ikaw gani maghinay-hinay
maunhan ka ni dodong nga perming nagsabaysabay

busa mintras sayo pa, panguyabi na si inday
kanang mga diskarti nga makahilak kunuhay
aron madani nimo siya bisan di na gamitan sa imong panagway
kay ang tawo ra ba lahi-lahi ug tan-aw kung unsa ang law-ay.


*bow gamay*

[peter_d_silent]

kahayahay gud nimo bai
nga nagpaulipon ka sa gugmang giatay
kinahanglan imo gyung mapasogut si inday
kay ang imong gihaguan, usik lang ug morag gilabay

pero hinaut imong hinumduman kanunay
nga ulahi na permi ang pagmahay
so kung ikaw gani maghinay-hinay
maunhan ka ni dodong nga perming nagsabaysabay

busa mintras sayo pa, panguyabi na si inday
kanang mga diskarti nga makahilak kunuhay
aron madani nimo siya bisan di na gamitan sa imong panagway
kay ang tawo ra ba lahi-lahi ug tan-aw kung unsa ang law-ay.


*bow gamay*

[chadix24_7]

ma bayot kog ahat ani

[wayuk]

@wayuk:Â*

dugaya pa sa monday oi....

it's so agonizing to wait....

if u have been true with the feelings u profes in ur poems, i think she's worth the wait.

[sweetfaith]

Haaay! Love is all around! ^_^

[bukog]

[kinoronahan]

love is all that matters..

[peter_d_silent]

Ako na nahatag niya gahapon ang letter... I placed it in her table sa laboratory before nagsugod amo klase, then I went back to the lecture room. Later I saw her read the letter, and she smiled when she read it. Gisiryoso kaha niya ang ako sulat o she just took it lightly? Sige lang, basta nabasa na niya... Pero nakuyawan ko kay basin kabalo siya kinsay naghatag... I'll see her again this afternoon, and I don't know what will happen... As I've promised in my letter, I'll just keep my distance.

I also gave her this as an introduction:

Confession

Instead of roses
Instead of songs
I offer you
my poems

I write because
I need to tell
you something

I write because
I may never
get another
chance
to tell you this --

(And "never" is a
terrifying word;
"never" is an awfully
long time) --

I need to tell you
how much you have
affected me
with your beauty...


And also this poem by Hafiz (1390) which is just beautiful and perfect,


Ode 147

Beauty alone will not account for her;
No single attribute her charm explains;
Though each be named, beyond it glimmers she,
Strangely distinct, mysteriously fair:
Hers this, this hers, and this -- yet she remains.
Wonderful is her hair -- she is not there;
Her a body a spirit is -- it is not she;
Her waist the compass of a silken thread;
Her mouth a ruby -- but it is not she:
Say all of her, yet hast thou nothing said.
Surely the beauty of houri or of fay
A fashion of beauty is -- but to my eye
Her way of beauty is beauty's only way

Unto this spring, sweet rose, pray draw anigh;
Sweet water't is -- my tears -- to water thee.

Thine eye, ah! what an arrow! thine eyebrow,
How strong a bow! and what an archer thou!
Ah! what a target hast thou made of me.

[enlighten]

nice au imong mga poem maka-in love....btw i hope she likes ur poem.....mas nice mangud mag write if inspired ka or kun dli depressed...

[mhai...07]

wooossshhhhh nmn..
gwabe ang haba..huh,,.!!!!
kakalaglag panty nmn..hhehhe,..
galing nmn ng poem mu..
at swerte nmn ni charisse poetic mu!!!! :mrgreen:

okie ka tol..
u got a great poem..
im sure nahan pod c charisse ato..
nahan mn gani ko na its not for me how much more ang ghatagan ato...