@rsabay2004
myembro pod kag DPP bai? kabantay man gud ko ana sa strobist section.
matay bow jud ko sa mga tawo dri. perti kanindot kaau mo mo process oi. mga idol tamo tanan.
@rsabay2004
myembro pod kag DPP bai? kabantay man gud ko ana sa strobist section.
matay bow jud ko sa mga tawo dri. perti kanindot kaau mo mo process oi. mga idol tamo tanan.
mu critic ko ha...
nice ang cropping although i think you need to work on your framing and composition before you take the shot. if the background doesn't help tell the story, just fill the frame with your subjects para wala nkay i crop later on.
also, ang colors are too saturated for my taste. it doesn't look natural anymore. next time, beware lng sa pag manipulate sa saturation.
and wala nay detail ang hair sa imo subjects. this has to do with lighting.
i'm guessing you just shot this with the flash faced forward. mas maayo unta if imo i bounce ang light off of the ceiling, granting that the ceiling is white. kay if ang flash is fired faced forward, mura ra jud ug snapshot.
pwd sad nimo i off cam imo flash and position the light 45 degrees from you subject so it will seem that the light is coming from a window to make the lighting look more natural. check out Zack Arias' One Light Photography DVD.
mao rana pre. i hope nka help ako c&c. keep on shooting....![]()
master ba oi. si karlo ug nonac ray master diri. heheheh. studyante pa tawn ko aning bisyoha. heheh. gusto lng pud ko mu share sa ako na learn kay gusto pud ko makat on para mu improve. basta sige lng tag practice, kat on, ug tudlo sa atong nakat onan, mu abot rata diha.![]()
slow by slow, we will success. hee hee.
Last edited by teeemoy; 02-13-2011 at 05:04 PM.
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