Poetry anyone?

[kyuusai]

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i can not love you with a love
that outcompares the boundless sea.
for that were false, and no such love
and no such ocean can ever be

but i can love you with a love
as finite as the wave that dies
and dying holds from crest to crest
the blue of everlasting skies.

[abortretryfail]

^ wow. very nice.

thanks! I'm actually making this into a series... just need to find another willing victim

[promqueen]

ONE NIGHT STAND
by ~promqueen

"the most beautiful place in the world,"

you told me,

"is under the sheets."

so we made it ours.

only ours.

you clutched me inside

under a paisley-filled heaven

and above an upholstered cloud.

no word were spoken

only unfinished poetry rhymes

and chords with missing strings.

we let no light pass

just love

or was it not?

i forgot to breathe

as your lips

collided with mine.

so much were already said between them

so much

that to shut up was bliss

and as we closed our eyes

once again

the world was ours.

the warmth lingered

as your whispered promises

danced on the sides of my ear

your hands trekking down

the tiny humps of my spine

your legs locked with my thighs…

and we wonder—

how coffee, books and laughter

had brought us into this world of happiness

that though wrapped in darkness

we saw the light back to ourselves

———us.

as one.

i felt your skin brushed with mine

my head was on your shoulder

and before it escaped me

my heart was beating next to yours

the next thing i knew

i was back in the bigger world

and they were asking

where's erik?

to which i asked back

erik who?

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[wicked_b]

that poem was made by my fren for me:,

That time I'd remembered

That time I'd remembered
we chatted and told stories
There were things I've learned
and new things dont want to miss

That time...
I discovered something from her.
That was different from before
Her personality & other more

That time..
I used to keep myself quiet
The things I heard and saw
A secret that no one must know

That time..
I fell in Love with her.
A feeling which was unexplainable
Which my heart gets nimble

That time...
I told her my feelings
But she already found one
A love she doesnt deserve to.

That time...
I was hurt and depressed
My heart full of regret
About her i must forget

That time..
we drank hard like forever
She owned the big stage
And told me all her emotions.

That time...
We went to the mall together
To get drunk & have fun
Now the sad story has begun

That time..
We went to a beautiful pond
She talk & im the listener
She cried & i caressed her.

That time...
We stared at each other
And our wet lips met
The thing i couldnt forget

That time...
I brought her back home
We rested & talked awhile
And she gave me a sweet smile

That time...
We brought to our feelings
We kissed deeply and passionately
But for her, it wasnt me.

That time...
She told me to be just friends
To look for a girl that deserves my heart
But for me, it was 'She'

That time...
We gave our goodbyes and kissed
That feeling I'll always miss
The smile, the hug, and touch of her skin.

That time...
I went home late
Had a rest & still thinking
Why this heart beating fast & hurt

And now I cant explain why
There are tears flowing to my eyes
Maybe coz I cant get her
And be afar from her.

I love her so much!
I dont know why she cant understand
I cant stop thinking of her
And I cant live without her.

There are wishes I wanted to happen
To be with her all my life
Or to be my future wife
And accept my heart in vain

This day to be remembered
The day I wrote this poem
The day that I still cried
And hoping to die rather than suffer.

[hera_82]

all sooooo lovely forms.

iSTORYANs rule in poetry!

[Care Bear]

a guy friend recently created this short one just for me

Love eternally for parts of you that are still unknown
Ever the same as before when loving you is home
Although we cannot speak of how much we love the present
Hoping that heaven lasts long enough for us to express it

[The_Child]

im not very good with poems, actually a frustrated poet of sorts. any thoughts of it pls pm me all criticisms are welcome.

A sojourn with the night,
in this dim room,
only a single candle alight,
a midnight of gloom.

Beethoven's Sonata fourteen,
and silence thereafter,
the passion of sorrow unseen,
then a melacholic laughter.

tears began to fall at last,
something involuntary,
the loneliness of the past,
and the present so weary,

The moon high above,
smiles and whispers,
of passion, betrayal and love,
a call to murder.

the cold steel laying silently,
its touch; soothing the most,
I will fullfill my will devoutly,
For All my faith is now forever lost.


-TheChild
August 23, 2006
9:08 PM

[KenjiBartin]

Like it was a piece

july 27, 2006

"Hit me with music, coz music feels no pain"

The musicman strikes his guitar like it was a piece of percussion drum

His fingers roam like a wild spider on the fret

The music was organic

His face looked like he just had an orgasm

The audience could only watch

He knows that some would disagree with his message

But he doesn't mind

It was never meant for anyone too worldly

[d_m00n_u]

check this link..

instant poetry...


https://www.istorya.net/forums/index....=91527.new#new

page 196?

[kyuusai]

utter stillness in the corner side of the room
a soul ague in sorrow
repudiated from real world
for the failure he entrusted

in those soft eyes
you can see his penitence
and his keen heart
asking for another chance