mY sO cAlLeD pHoToGrApHy.... (open for C&C)

[t_jay]

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Guys, newbie shot ni ha.. hehehe.. open for comments and critics... para sad makahibaw ko kng unsa dapat e improve....
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[brenz105]

nindot ang una ug ika duha nga pics. ang ika 3 ky naglibog ko sa sand if na over expose or ana lang jd ang iya color. ok ang composition sa ika 4, nice natural framing. ang ika 5 ky mas ok if straight jd siya. ang fireworks, kung naay mga structures sa background, or bsta naay something nga mka add aside sa pure black lang, ok pod unta. ang pang last ky murag hiwi gamay ang horizon.

[t_jay]

nindot ang una ug ika duha nga pics. ang ika 3 ky naglibog ko sa sand if na over expose or ana lang jd ang iya color. ok ang composition sa ika 4, nice natural framing. ang ika 5 ky mas ok if straight jd siya. ang fireworks, kung naay mga structures sa background, or bsta naay something nga mka add aside sa pure black lang, ok pod unta. ang pang last ky murag hiwi gamay ang horizon.

bro, thanx sa comments... all are noted.... hehehe

[ongkal]

WAAAAAA. JEJEMON IMO TITLE. ajejejejejejejeje

[alucard_x]

Just want to share my personal thoughts on the images you posted.

1. Great scene but the composition doesn't work for me. IMO I would rather compose this 2/3 sea or 2/3 sky.

2. The bokeh for me is kinda distracting, I would rather do a tight crop.

3. Most of the time I notice when viewing landscapes from other photog they tend to "frame within a frame" incorporating foreground within thier landscape shots, like shrubs, trees or viewing to a window. For this I think a foreground is missing to make this shot an interesting image.

4.Not good composition for me.
5. I would rather recompose this shot, incorporating a sense of scale and perspective.
6.no comment
7. I would crop this with less sky and your visual interest has been established by the sun and the man on the boat.

TFS and keep on shooting.

[mindless]

Nice. Beautiful images. I also like the watermark, dili kaayo common, unlike the dreaded concept "*fill in the blank* ____________ Photography."

[t_jay]

Thank you for the comments guys.... pls keep them coming....

[paopaosanchez]

No.4 naputol ang bangka. guba ang composition. mas okey kung whole bangka ang nakita. nndot na lugar na dha sa camotes. lake danao ? sakto?

[dSAINT]

senxa bai d ko kita sa pics

[t_jay]

No.4 naputol ang bangka. guba ang composition. mas okey kung whole bangka ang nakita. nndot na lugar na dha sa camotes. lake danao ? sakto?

sakto bro... Lake Danao.....