im not a pro.. but i do like to write labina ug ma-igo sa gugma, sa kasakit ug sa kalipay hehe... heres something i wrote sa-unang panahon na nag emote ko.. constructive criticisms anyone?
Why does it move me more
to write in pain?
Why do I write for a love,
when the love's no more?
Probably...
In happiness, in love,
My rhyme's with you.
You become my parchment.
You take the words,
That my eyes do speak.
The fingers write the
passion in your chest.
The prose they flow,
To your ears from my breath.
The name is signed,
By my lips as we kiss.
You become my art, my prose,
stealing time, you..
My living writing,
And I hope I've written well.