CRITIQUE: Portraits Only!

[merlwafu]

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PaCC mga master.. comments, suggestions or violent reactions are accepted..
Inspired by Zack's One Light



Pa apil nalang pod ni.. heheh..

[michaelocana]

ayayyyyy ang MIO-Boy hehehehehe

#2, merl mas nindot kng naa sa 45deg sa right ang light.. para naay morag visbility sa imo back.. nya ma specify ang mga buhok nga nanglupad hehe sa akoa rana ha... gnahan ko sa concept..

[merlwafu]

@master mike.. ehehe... dili nako mioboy ron master.. BEATboy na..

hehe.. wala koy reflecktor lagi.. nindot unta to naa isa sa likod.. para naay fill light.. ang key light ani master naa sa akong face jud.. nya naka potos ug carton ang flash..

[long4short]

First of all, take your fake lensflare out. It doesn't add into the picture. And looking at the shadow in your picture the flare could never have been there.
Work on a concept, it feels very akward in the position plus background she is in.
Give her more room on the top of the photo to show a better composition plus give more background info
Maybe pop the pink a little bit more up so she gets more out of the background.



The distracting little plant is annoying me big time. Especially because your model is glaring at it and looking quite googly eyed.
Maybe light up a little of the right side of her face with a reflector.


This is just two photos but the model you've picked, she doesn't really seem versatile/have a lot of facial expression.
With the lack of concept+background incorporation they look a little dull.
Try to go out with an idea what you wanna get, and make the model more comfortable and try out things.


Pag sorry ko for my English. I'm a foreigner and don't fully speak bisaya yet

Appreciated... Noted... and noted... thanks!!!

[P-Chan]

Thanks for the comments, truly appreciate it... hahaha mao lagi na putol ang fingers..had hard time adjusting to the nifty fifty considering the space that was available... naa koy question about sa exposures, when it comes to different monitors, naa bay standard na light adjustment? kay ako monitor hayag kaau bsag low na kaau ang light and sometimes mag lisod ko when it comes to editing my pics na..I am bothered when thinking how dark or how bright it would look on other people's monitors...

OT: ang mga monitor calibrator devices mo ingon rah if unsa ka hayag or ka low light ang imu monitor.. if kuti ka ug colour or tig print ka it's a good investment

PaCC mga master.. comments, suggestions or violent reactions are accepted..
Inspired by Zack's One Light

Pa apil nalang pod ni.. heheh..]

first picture blur

2nd picture nice pero mas better if ang iyang body wa kaayo sideways but then again idk if mo lupad ang beads if dili

[merlwafu]

first picture blur

2nd picture nice pero mas better if ang iyang body wa kaayo sideways but then again idk if mo lupad ang beads if dili

wala ko kabantay sa blur da.. salamats.. noted..

[kizzy_met21]

Post kog mga bag-o ha..





as always, criticism is welcome.. kay murag last nani nakong post hahaha maninuod nalng kos pagka HMUA nako..di nako mag photographer...hehehe..

[alucard_x]

[QUOTE=kizzy_met21;14107575]


First image - The leaves a re bit distracting for me and I would rather approach this angle to be close-up or a tight crop.

2nd Image - I like the expression but the crop is a bit awkward. There are to many bright highlights and it competes with the way i am viewing overall image.

[alucard_x]

Yes, this image is OOF.


It would better if you shot this with the hands...just a side light profile shot nalang unta.

[Jajarbinx]

Hi mga sir. Shared this sa laing thread but found this thread.

Sharing mine using Canon Rebel T2i and 50mm 1.8. Pa critique unya ko mga sir.