CRITIQUE: Portraits Only!

[roanjean]

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hows my post processing? i'm kinda leaning on it more. self study r jd ku taman.

Mao ra ni akong observation ha pero noob sad ko hehe.

Obvious (at least for me) and post-processing sa face on the 1st photo. I'm not sure if it's because of the lighting but dili kaayo natural ang itsura sa nose and right cheek. Unlike sa 2nd nga murag 'nacho' ra.

[inrune]

Here's a more recent shot I did. Critique please.
Ako ni manghud.. again, candid.
Any tips to improve would be helpful.

[andrew_ece]

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[GIROME]

pakritik pudko apil

[digitalartistbem]

Pa kritik pud ko ani. Beginner, daghan pajud ko need ma learn, photoshop fanatic here, pero gusto ko maka sabot sa photography kay need man gud gihapun ang high quality pic for graphic design...

beautiful kau si model noh?, seriously...

[foldofus]

wa na lagi kau mu comment ug critic? mu critic nya ko diri pero constructive.=p

[vernie]

Unless daghan pa laing butang angay masulod sa frame, mas maayo dili ma chop off ang ulo.

Pa kritik pud ko ani. Beginner, daghan pajud ko need ma learn, photoshop fanatic here, pero gusto ko maka sabot sa photography kay need man gud gihapun ang high quality pic for graphic design...

beautiful kau si model noh?, seriously...

[vernie]

The subjects eye is looking to the right. Best results is to give more space on the right.
Unless you want all attention on the finger and leaf connection (which I don't see here), never add something nga mo ilog sa attention sa viewer that makes the whole thing mahimong walay klaro ang tumong. Effective lang ang pag himo ug pasiga diha kung ang subject nag tan-aw mismo sa iyang gihawiran. Solution ani aron mas effective is a reshoot.

pakritik pudko apil

[vernie]

Kinahanglan ma focus pud ang iyang gihawiran nga ice cream since maoy center of attention nga gipasabot ani nga photo.
A deeper depth of field with an initial focus on the ice cream cone will also give some focus on the face.

Here's a more recent shot I did. Critique please.
Ako ni manghud.. again, candid.
Any tips to improve would be helpful.

[vernie]

first photo: Can be improved by aligning the horizontal step ladder. Medyo sobra ang pag lingon ng subject, kunting bawi to the right will present more confidence.

secone photo: A softer shadow on lower right corner will no longer disturb the expression presented. This one have a harder shadow on it, the good thing is it can be lighten digitally.

just sharing...

paki katay na rin.


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