CRITIQUE: Portraits Only!

[ayahay]

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Any portrait: solo, group, self

Pangitaan jud og bati, ug palihug butangi og rason. Be specific, polite and helpful.

ANYONE can make critique (from noob to pro).
You are not obliged to post your photo to make critique, but if you want feedback of your work, please do so.

NO SNAPSHOTS PLEASE
...and also pictures taken at social events.
Maximum of 2 pictures per post.

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Cge, ako ang mo-una

This is one of my favorites, but feel free to break my heart

[tattee]

Noob comment:

Murag lahi na cam ila gina tanaw. Aw ambot lng pud!

BTW, the reason why I stated my comment above is because the two boys at the bottom appear to pose for a picture.

Nice B&W rendering though!

[ayahay]

Thanks Tattee!! I really appreciate ur reply. they were really posing for me. Ako man na sila gi-remote gitik.

Dont be afraid to make critique especially negative ones kay mao na ang pinakaimportante! BRING IT ON

Noob comment:

Murag lahi na cam ila gina tanaw. Aw ambot lng pud!

BTW, the reason why I stated my comment above is because the two boys at the bottom appear to pose for a picture.

Nice B&W rendering though!

[snake_eye]

for me, it's nice...nindot ang effect imong gibuhat...
is this edited or raw lang ni? being a newbie I can't really see the difference pa man gud...

[ayahay]

Edited. Gi-convert to black and white, gi-adjust nako ang exposure, contrast, brightness, highlights, midtones, ug shadows. Gi-enhance nako ang detail, gi-sharpen, gikuhaan gamay og noise, gicrop, nya gibutangan og vignette. Mao "ra" gud hehehe...

for me, it's nice...nindot ang effect imong gibuhat...
is this edited or raw lang ni? being a newbie I can't really see the difference pa man gud...

[Hat Trick]

mo share kog snapshot ha, sooc, unedited, no cropping done, etc.

be easy on me mam ayahay! tambagi ko unsa pay akong buhaton para mo nindot pa ni akong pic..

[joieboi]

mo share kog snapshot ha, sooc, unedited, no cropping done, etc.

be easy on me mam ayahay! tambagi ko unsa pay akong buhaton para mo nindot pa ni akong pic..

OT: gwapaha

[ayahay]

Ok!

It would be better if wala sya ga-slouch. She could do something else with her arms/hands. Mas nindot unta kon relaxed iyang pose. Avoid unecessary elements in the shot, gisamukan ko sa poste sa luyo niya. Ug gamay na lang kuwang ma-crop na dapit sa iyang knee joints. Lovely smile and beautiful dress (i like like like it).

mo share kog snapshot ha, sooc, unedited, no cropping done, etc.

be easy on me mam ayahay! tambagi ko unsa pay akong buhaton para mo nindot pa ni akong pic..

[malds]

tambagi pd ko ma'am ayahay.. ayaw lng sd nang harsh kaau kay weak au kog heart...

[wildfuzz]

mo share kog snapshot ha, sooc, unedited, no cropping done, etc.

be easy on me mam ayahay! tambagi ko unsa pay akong buhaton para mo nindot pa ni akong pic..

gwapaha ani bai oi..hehehhe